1. Word List
| benefit | complete | develop | dismay | ease | hail | lack | master |
| patriot | project | recommend | remark | represent | sufficient | utter |
2. Story - try 1st
I learned about many patriots in shcool history class.
Their efforts and sacrifices were so great.
Thus, I have hailed them.
Also, I have tried to have a patriotism like them.
These days, I heard the news related to some of patriots.
The news portraied their miserable conditions.
I thought they should live in good and confortable life, because they were good people for everyone, not only their nearby.
However, They have had a hard life.
This news dismayed me.I thought this issue was ridiculous.
The goverment trys to give many benefits to them, However, the goverment's policy doesn't can't cover whole patriots.
In the news, the master of society policy remarked the goverment should develop the policies in line with the changing situation.
He recommended many good policies to the administration.
I hope that the goverment would update policies to ease patoriots' though life.
If the goverment set the people who replace patriots, and they would utter their real situations and issues, then goverement could make complete policies.
Even though, the goverment make the complete polices, we should give sufficient attention on this issue.
We should have a grateful heart for them, because if they weren't in our country or this world, our country or our world would lack many things which you couldn't imagine.
There are many prive projects for patriots. If you are interested in this issue, I suggest you to search about these. You don't have to do something remarkable.
3. Story - try 2nd
I learned about many patriots in shcool history class.
-> I learned about many patriots in elementary, middle, and high schools history classes.
Their efforts and sacrifices were so great
-> Through the classes, I got to know theire efforts and sacrifices were so great..
Thus, I have hailed them.
-> Thus, I have hailed them with respect..
Also, I have tried to have a patriotism like them.
-> Also, I have tried to get sense of patriotism like them.
These days, I heard the news related to some of patriots.
-> These dyas, I saw the news related to some of patriots' life.
The news portraied their miserable conditions.
-> The news portaied thier miserable conditions.
I thought they should live in good and confortable life, because they were good people for everyone, not only their nearby.
-> I thought they should live in good and comfortable lives, because they devoted oneself to their country for others, not personal benefits.
However, They have had a hard life.
-> However, they have had hard lives.
This news dismayed me.I thought this issue was ridiculous.
-> This news dismayed me a lot. I though this situation was so ridiculous.
The goverment trys to give many benefits to them, However, the goverment's policy can't cover whole patriots.
-> The goverment have tried to give many benefits to them. However, the goverment's policy can't cover whole partiots.
In the news, the master of society policy remarked the goverment should develop the policies in line with the changing situation.
-> In the news, the master of society policy remarked the goverment should develop the policies in line with the changing situation.,
He recommended many good policies to the administration.
-> He recommended many good policies to the administartion in the interview.
I hope that the goverment would update policies to ease patoriots' though life.
-> I hopte that the goverment would update policies to ease patriots' though lives.
If the goverment set the people who replace patriots, and they would utter their real situations and issues, then goverement could make complete policies.
-> I think If the goverment elect people who replace patriots, and they would utter their real situations and issues, then goverment could make more complete policies for them.
Even though, the goverment make the complete polices, we should give sufficient attention on this issue.
-> Even though, the goverment make perfect complete policies, we should give sufficient attention on patriots.
We should have a grateful heart for them, because if they weren't in our country or this world, our country or our world would lack many things which you couldn't imagine.
-> We should have a grateful heart for them, because if they weren't in our country or this word, our country or world would lack many things which you couldn't imangine.
There are many prive projects for patriots. If you are interested in this issue, I suggest you to search about these. You don't have to do something remarkable. Small behavior is enough.
-> There are many private projects for patriots. If you are interested in this issues, I sugges you to look for these projects. you don't have to do something remarkable. Even small action give good effect.